First I'll list the things I did not do well. For the delivery, I said "umm" and "and" many times. I also, often glanced up and touched my mask. I also clasped my hands a lot which was not very good since I need to be more open to the audience. Another thing was that I looked at the screen a few times even though the slide is not for me but for the audience. A really small thing that I noticed was when I talked about Ollie being trapped in a cramped bowl, I gestured a big bowl. This didn't match what I wanted to say so I needed to fix that. For the content of the presentation, I said two things in the wrong way. One was when I talked about the author's job, and another was when I said the one last thing. For the one last thing I forgot what to say so I had a moment of silence and a moment of "umms". I also thought that my one last thing was too long. I need to make it more short and powerful so that the audience won't get bored....