During the summer I worked on fixing my book review essay and practicing the presentation. I changed the minor changes on the day we got feedback from Mr. Paterson but it took lots of time to make the major changes. I had to add more references and make the conclusion longer. Today was the first day back from summer break. We were first told that more people should be doing flipgrid and the presentation practice. However, I was one of the people who actually took the video so I was very proud of myself. I got feedback from Mayako; she told me that overall my presentation was good and it wasn't missing anything but she also told me that I should shorten my summary and make my critique longer. I agreed with her advice since I always thought that I said too much in my summary but since I already made my slides so it was hard for me to change it. I am planning to change my slides before the presentation day and take Mayako advice and make the critique...